Score: 10

"its another review"

submission: The iPhone Shuffle

date: December 14, 2008

OMG thats so hot! i want an iphone shuffle now too, so i can call random people for the cheap price of 149.99 also TomaMoto has an awesome voice!

<3Tuna

Score: 10

"OMG!"

submission: Sounds of Cs 2

date: November 27, 2008

LOL! this is so funny! CONGRATULATIONS on making something awesome for your first submission! anyways you should start using better effects for your smoking guns. there's also alot more you can do in flash so dont forget to experiment too

Score: 7

"actually 5 not 7 ( peer pressure )"

submission: Tutorial: Flash Game

date: November 22, 2008

alright so this is a good tutorial for beginners to look at, you get props for that this seeing as it is an informative and easy to understand tut.
however visually it was very ordinary so if you plan to make more you could make your next tutorials better with your own customized menus and buttons etc if you dont customise your works people wont be able to say 'hey that's dan0vs' tut i learnt alot, they wouldn't be ably to distinguish you from all the other tuts, so think about that. done and enjoy the review

Score: 6

"mobile phone"

submission: The Penalty Shootout

date: November 22, 2008

this is like those mobile phone games, its nice and simple for your first tries, your colours are good but needs more tone to it cause it looks flat, your backgrounds and setting are good too but it also needs work. For example the sky which had nothing there, then there was the stadium which could have been given more detail so you should try looking at architecture of stadiums in order to get a better idea of how it looks. the overall game is nice and basic.

Score: 4

"DX DAMN!"

submission: Xaos: Breaking News

date: November 22, 2008

YOU BEAT ME TO IT! i was gonna animate that track.... anyways it could have been way better, if i made this i would have done scenes with the audiences reactions and stuff. i would have used characters from newgrounds like the SHOOP DA WHOOP guy etc
if i made this i would have thought about it more and put more effort into it .... still amusing though, damn it!

Score: 8

"hmmm"

submission: The Alabaster Colossus

date: November 21, 2008

its really good but you need more plots to the story, it was sorta random and difficult to understand the situation, overall your the characters where great, the colours were good too but it needed to be refined abit. A background would be nice too i think the blue gradient brought the colours down abit. furthermore keep working on movement and anatomy of the hands it needs more control and structure.

ps love the voices

Score: 7

"I MADE A CAKE!"

submission: The Cooking Game #1

date: November 19, 2008

LOL what's with the icon it doesn't do the game any justice! same with the menu, have you tried the trace bitmap option in flash yet? you could make the background cartoony too with that option. Overall your ingredients in here looked great!

Score: 10

"I HAVE A SUGGESTION"

submission: Basic Head Drawing

date: November 18, 2008

you know how this is the internet and you cant see how people look like and all you can see is their personality, perhaps you could draw what you think they look like. just a suggestion though. :3 nice tut by the way i see you draw the traditional way.

Score: 8

"I LIKED THIS!"

submission: Erbal Jay Ep2 part 1

date: November 18, 2008

its great to see people experimenting! your adaptations of your inspirations was impressive, however i know its inspired through comics and all but because you used a camera maybe you should've considered using some panning in your shots, camera movement would compliment this really well.
also a better compressor would be good the quality was really bad.

Score: 10

"OMG DRAXOR!"

submission: The Story of a Rock

date: November 18, 2008

NOW I REALLY LOVE YOU! X3 THIS MADE MY DAY!
this was soo simple yet soo dramatic i nearlly cried! you get a 10 for your story! I dont care what this is really about! you have the ignorance of an artist! I LOVE IT! you have created something very beautiful but i have to say that you still need to perfect your skill so dont lose the magic! btw the music was beautiful too who composed this!?